Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Student Sentence Composing #53


Expert Sentence:
By the dawn, the house smelled of Sunday: chicken frying, bacon sizzling, and smoke sausages baking.


JChapps Sentence:
Upon the morrow, the classroom was ripe with the pungent aromas of the end-of-year holiday party: wafting sugary confections of all shapes and sizes, steaming popcorn drizzled with melted butter, and smoldering pepperoni pizza pungent with garlic seasoning.


Maeve's Sentence:
By the afternoon, the boy looked of a football player: fresh grass stains, new helmet, and a recently boiled mouthguard.


Janel’s Sentence:
By sunrise, we and our things must vanish: clean clothes, intact tools, and all of our money.


Zak’s Sentence:
During the evening, the neighborhood smelled like a BBQ: grilling hamburgers, blazing hot dogs, and fresh flaming rib eye.


Enzo’s Sentence:
By the evening, the store was crowded: TVs being taken, people running around, and huge lines forming.


Luke’s Sentence:
By the end of the game, the athlete was done: heart pumping rapidly, forehead sweating, and legs completely tired.


Michael's Sentence:
By the start of overtime, the stadium sounded as thunder: Cam Newton getting destroyed by Von Miller, refs arguing, and both coaches yelling.


Jonah’s Sentence
By the time one minute passed, the house smelled of smoke: fire roaring, people screaming, and all of their possessions burning.


Sarah’s Sentence:
By the stroke of midnight, the room was pitch black: sun down, no windows, all electronics off, and a no-moon outside.


Drake’s Sentence:
Just before the morning, the kitchen smelled of Saturday: pancakes steaming, sausages popping, and hot waffles cooking.    


Sam’s sentence:
At the end of the day, the city felt normal again: restaurants running, stores selling, and people shopping through the streets.


Ella’s Sentence:
By sunset, the tree house smelled of happiness: brownies baking, flowers blooming, and chocolate pancakes cooking.


Jack’s Sentence:
By the evening, the apartment smelled like Thanksgiving: turkey steaming, water boiling, and a pumpkin pie baking.


Joe’s Sentence:
In the room, the air smelled of Christmas spirit: a fraser fir, cookies baking, and egg nog.


Anthea’s Sentence:
By now, she dressed in black: black spikey jacket, black diamond-pattern choker, and wore a sad expression on her face.

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