Thursday, November 3, 2016

Sentence Composing #039 - Student Examples

Expert Sentence
Johnny had been quietly finishing his fifth barbecue sandwich, but now he announced: “We’re goin’ back and turn ourselves in.”


JChapps’ Sentence
Emily has been nervously completing her fifth Harry Potter book, but now she blurted:  “Harry’s heading back to Hogwarts to challenge Voldemort!”


Maddie’s Sentence
Kylie had been slowly chewing her first caramel apple, when she announced: “We are going to need to go back to the orthodontist again.”


Maeve’s Sentence
Betty had been sadly trying to fix her first action figure, but now she yelled: “We are going back and getting me a new one!”


Finn’s Sentence:
Holst had been angrily writing his next flavor text, but now he bellowed: “We are going back and downloading Cisco NAC Agent for reasons!”


Anna’s Sentence:
Mary had previously been silently grading her twenty-five typed papers, but now she is stated: “We’re checking the papers and turning them back in.”


Elizabeth’s sentence
Sara was carefully creating her last chocolate cupcake, but now she shouted: “I’m going back and doing these all over again!”


Nicholas’ Sentence:
Rick had been noisily throwing darts at the board, then he yelled: “that's my third one in a row!”


Caleb’s Sentence:
Jimmy had been throwing wild pitches the entire game, until his coach yelled: “Alex come in and finish off this inning.”


Katie’s Sentence
Abbie had been peacefully watching her favorite TV show, although she was thinking: “Do I have any homework tonight?”


Carter’s Sentence
George had been peacefully studying his math homework, although he’s been thinking: “I also need to study my science review.”


Marley’s Sentence
Kate was trying to frantically write down all of the history notes, but she let out a huge sigh and spoke: “I am too stressed out and I need a break.”


Sana’s Sentence
Mark had just cheated on his science test for the fifth time, but his friends announced: “We’re telling on him this is not okay.”


Evan’s Sentence
Jaden was silently playing flappy golf, but he screamed:  “Let's go first place and beat the other players!”


Jeremiah’s Sentence
Josh had quickly devoured his second granola bar, but now he shouted: “We're going to kill all zombies and turn back to town.”  


Grace’s Sentence
Jackson had been looking at his seventh Harry Potter book, but finally he decided: “I have to finish this book so I can say I have read all the books.”

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