Friday, October 23, 2015

Flex Friday Update



Several parents have reached out to say how much they appreciate the concept of Flex Fridays.

As over-scheduled our students are at times, and as hectic as running a classroom can be, it's nice to have a quite work space dedicated to keeping various items that we juggle from falling through the cracks.

It's clearly working.

Here is an updated Powerpoint slide that the students see every Friday to remind us all of how the focus is squarely on them -- as it should be.


Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Criterion Practice Writing



Just as airline captains use flight simulators and pro baseball players use batting cages, students become better writers by writing more often.  Research shows that quantity is just as important as quality when it comes to writing improvement.

In a world were teachers are scrambling for instructional minutes and classroom ratios of student-to-teacher are ever increasing, it makes sense to have fun practice assignment that allow for student choice.

"Robo-grading" is one way to alleviate this burden, but these writing practice exercises are no substitute for the eyes of an experienced, veteran writing teacher.

Student Choice Writing Prompts - Narrative Practice

Choose Either:
Practice Option A:  Imposter
Practice Option B:  River Swimming

Worth 25 Points

6 = 25 Points (A)
5 = 22 Points (B+)
4 = 20 Points (B-)
3 = 18 Points (C)
2 = 0 Points (E)
1 = 0 Points (E)

This assignment is due on Friday 10/30/15 at the end of the day.  After that the grade goes down one full grade for every additional day it is late with a maximum penalty of a 50% loss. 

Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Sentence Composing Adjective Phrases Review



The following slides were from our Sentence Composing warm up activities in class.  To prepare for the quiz, you may want to review the following slides.  Please pardon any typos, as these are working draft documents in process.


















For the quiz, sentences will be graded holistically based upon:

1)  Demonstrating knowledge of the grammar concept being taught through application

2)  Imitating the structure of the model without copying it too closely

3)  Creative use of word choices, story, and phrasing within the structure

4)  Spelling, punctuation, grammar, usage and mechanics

Summary Paragraph - White Board Notes



TIPS FOR FINDING KEY FACTS

TS LEFTOVERS.  Use whatever didn’t fit on your topic sentence that you wanted to include (but lacked the space).

PARAGRAPH SEEDS.  If there are paragraphs, choose the most important idea in each paragraph.

RECAP CONVERSATION. Imagine a conversation with someone (a friend, a grandma) who didn’t know about the topic, what would you want to include, and what would you want to leave out?

AUTHOR’S USE OF SPACE.  Look at the space dedicated to each idea by the author.  If the author uses a lot of space in the source text talking about one aspect of the idea, then they are telling you that that part is important and should be included in the summary.


COMMON TOPIC SENTENCE MISTAKES

1) Neglecting to mention the Nobel Peace Prize

2) Not fully understanding the text (words like: compulsory, Jihad, etc) – look up words that you don’t understand

3) Misspellings – use the source text

4) Capitalization – Nobel Peace Prize

Thursday, October 15, 2015


4 steps

1.  Read the article for deep understanding.  (You can’t write about something that you don’t understand.)
2.  Write a topic sentence and have Mr. Chappell check it.
3.  Write a list of key facts below your topic sentence in the same file, submit, and have Mr. Chappell check it.
4.  Write your summary paragraph

You are reading an article.  The title should be in “quotes.”

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Board Notes Update

Tuesday 10/13/15

Summary Writing Essential Questions

1.  How do I know what information to put into the summary, and what information I should leave out?

In other words, how do I tell the difference between a key fact and an unnecessary detail?

2.  How do I know how many key facts should be included in a summary?

3. What is the difference between summarizing and paraphrasing?

4. How do I paraphrase?



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Monday 10/12/15

3 Types of Writing:

1) Narrative
- Stories
- Plays
- Memoirs

2) Informational
- Book Report
- Research Project
- Summary

3)  Argument
- C.E.R.S.
- Literary Analysis









Sunday, October 4, 2015

Writing a Summary
A summary is condensed version of a larger reading.  A summary is not a rewrite of the original piece and does not have to be long nor should it be long.  To write a summary, use your own words to express briefly  the main idea and relevant details of the piece you have read.   Your purpose in writing the summary is to give the basic ideas of the original reading.  What was it about and what did the author want to communicate? 
While reading the original work, take note of what or who is the focus and ask the usual questions that reporters use: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?  Using these questions to examine what you are reading can help you to write the summary.
Sometimes, the central idea of the piece is stated in the introduction or first paragraph, and the supporting ideas of this central idea are presented one by one in the following paragraphs. Always read the introductory paragraph thoughtfully and look for a thesis statement.  Finding the thesis statement is like finding a key to a locked door.  Frequently, however, the thesis, or central idea, is implied or suggested.  Thus, you will have to work harder to figure out what the author wants readers to understand. Use any hints that may shed light on the meaning of the piece: pay attention to the title and any headings and to the opening and closing lines of paragraphs.
In writing the summary, let your reader know the piece that you are summarizing. Identify the title, author and source of the piece. You may want to use this formula:
In "Title of the Piece" (source and date of piece), author shows that: central idea of the piece.  The author supports the main idea by using _____________________ and showing that ______________________________________________________.

Here is a sample summary:
In the short story "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty," author James Thurber humorously presents a character who fantasizes about himself as a hero enduring incredibly challenging circumstances. In his real life, Walter Mitty lives an ordinary, plain life; he is a husband under the control of an overbearing, critical wife.  Thurber uses lively dialogue to give readers an understanding of Mitty's character. The story takes place over a period of about twenty minutes; during this brief time, Mitty drives his wife to the hairdresser and runs errands that his wife has given him while he waits for her. In between his worrying that he is not doing what she wants him to do, he daydreams about himself as a great surgeon, brilliant repair technician, expert marksman, and brave military captain. This story shows that fantasy is often a good alternative to reality.


Remember:
  • Do not rewrite the original piece.
  • Keep your summary short.
  • Use your own wording.
  • Refer to the central and main ideas of the original piece.
  • Read with who, what, when, where, why and how questions in mind.
  • Do not put in your opinion of the issue or topic discussed in the original piece. Often, instructors ask students to put their opinions in a paragraph separate from the summary.
source:

http://homepage.smc.edu/reading_lab/writing_a_summary.htm

Thursday, October 1, 2015

Test Retakes Policy


If a student scores less than a "C" (or 75%) they will have the opportunity to review their incorrect answers, meet for additional support from the teacher, and retake the test at a later time.

In order to be given the chance to retake a test, a student must provide a short description of what they did in order to prepare.  In other words, why do they anticipate great success the second time?

The maximum grade possible on a retake is a "C" in order to be fair to the students who performed well on it the first time.

The deadline for retakes is by the end of the marking period.  Only one retake is granted to a student on any given test.

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