Monday, November 28, 2016
Student Examples of Sentence Composing #51 Colons
Expert Sentence #51:
I gave her happy memories: a ride on a merry-go-round, a kitten to play with, a special toy.
JChapps' Sentence:
Obi-wan gave Luke Jedi instruction: training with the lightsaber, philosophy on the ways of the Force, expert piloting skills.
Elisabeth’s Sentence:
I told them the harsh details: the war-ravaged village, the terrified children to comfort, the choking fog.
Alexander’s Sentence:
I gave my brother presents: a Marvel action figure, a Marvel comic book, a set of Pokemon cards.
Kylie’s Sentence:
I gave him the best day ever: a surprise-like birthday party, a huge birthday cake with twenty candles to blow out, a ton of balloons.
Ashley’s Sentence:
I offered her many gifts: a ride on a bike, a puppy to run with, a new friend.
Jack’s Sentence:
I gave him many gifts: a brand new Xbox, a GoPro to ski with, a little dog.
Hunter’s Sentence:
I received from his treasure chest: a golden coin, a special pearl to talk to, a creative bracelet.
Joe’s Sentence:
He gave her a lot of items: a gumball machine, a hot tub, a Wi-Fi router.
Noah’s sentence:
I have practiced many professions: a school bus driver, a hit man, a tour guide.
Tom’s Sentence:
The coach gave the player directions: bunt for a base hit, steal second and third base, score the game-winning run on a ball put in play.
Marisa’s Sentence:
They gave him everything: a walk to the dog park, a chicken flavored bone for him to devour, a comfy bed for him to snooze on.
Alex’s Sentence:
She gave him a delicious feast: a piece of turkey, a bowl of stuffing, a table filled with food.
Jaida’s Sentence:
I threw her an amazing birthday party: a delicious cake, a lot of balloons, a room filled with presents.
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