Thursday, December 1, 2016

Student Sentence Examples #54



Expert Sentence:
Animals took shape: yellow giraffes,  blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance.


JChapps’ Sentence:
The intra-dimensional life forms horrifically transmogrified before her eyes in a state of abject madness:  squirming tentacles, oozing pustules, and barbed spinal columns undulated in the primordial slime.


Alexander’s Sentence:
There are four houses for Hogwarts: red Gryffindor, yellow Hufflepuff, blue Ravenclaw, green Slytherin hoping to win the House Cup.


Marcus’ Sentence:
Tormented memories took form: ironclad warriors, dark mountain dwarfs, panting war horses, their king cloaked in the inky blackness of the hours before sunrise.


Jackson’s Sentence:
Cities took shape: tall buildings, long buses, many people, small businesses isolated from the outside world.


Collin’s Sentence:
The vision of the food took shape: green apples, yellow bananas, blue blueberries, and the juicy watermelon sitting in the bowl.


Jake’s Sentence
The team got ready: black suits, red ties, gold cufflinks, loud buses waiting in the parking lot.


Jonny’s Sentence:
The uniforms came in: white jerseys, black pants, dark socks, gold helmets that looked very swag.


Seth’s Sentence:
Lots of animals at the zoo: striped tigers, black gorillas, patterned giraffes, furry polar bears all frolicking in their habitats.


David’s Sentence:
The BMX bike took shape: black tires, a leather seat ,blue bike grips, a chrome bike frame  sat shining in the old garage.


Clara’s sentence:
Books on all kinds of different topics filled the shelves: science books, fantasy stories, graphic novels, and even history books from a time long before I could read.


Expert Sentence:
Animals took shape  -- yellow giraffes,  blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers--  cavorting in crystal substance.


Alex’s Sentence:
The students sat down with their school supplies: #2 pencils, scrap paper, calculators, that were being used for the toughest math test of the year.


Madison’s Sentence:
Music instruments filled the room: guitars, violins, dust - covered untouched pianos stood ready for the young musicians.

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