Friday, March 26, 2010

























READ THIS FIRST: If you are logging in during the break, you will want to go to the left sidebar and pull up Chapter XIV, where we left off Friday 2/1/2010. This was Friday's home work for the day we left. This will be due on Monday.

I decided to put the future blogs out early for those who are at home and want to work ahead over the break.

This NOT going to be required for when we get back, but will console those eager readers who don't want to lose the scent of the hunt!

You will be expected to continue reading in class and to to turn in your journals at the normal due date.

If you read the other blogs after XIV, there will be SPOILERS!

Enjoy your Spring Break!























Manuscript

Okay, here we go...

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ASSIGNMENTS

Vocabulary Words:

assuage
inexorable
maudlin
abhorrent
incongruous


Journal: Writing the One Paragraph Essay

You will have two days to complete this journal entry along with it's steps.

You must do each step of the writing yourself before moving on to the next.

DAY ONE

STEP A. Choose one of the following prompts:

EASY DIFFICULTY - How does Agatha Christie use the imagery and the metaphor of humans as animals in her novel And Then There Were None?

- or -

MEDIUM DIFFICULTY - How is the theme of guilt woven into the novel And Then There Were None by Agatha Christie?

- or -

CHALLENGE DIFFICULTY - How is the theme of retribution woven into the novel And Then There Were None by Agatha Christie?


STEP B -
Brainstorm ideas on one page of your journal.


STEP C
- Use this outline (in the exact same format) to organize your ideas on one page. Don't write in full sentences yet, just short blurbs or words for your ideas.

I. Introduction: Topic Sentence ______________________________
II. Body.
A. 4ESSD #1_________________________________
B. 4ESSD #2_________________________________
C. 4ESSD #3_________________________________
III. Conclusion: Restate Topic Sentence _______________________

STEP D - Write the 1 paragraph essay as a rough draft. It should be no more than nine sentences and a single page and a half of your journal.

Now take a break. Let the ideas simmer for 24 hours. When you look at your work with fresh eyes you will be much better off than if you try to cram it all in at once.

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DAY TWO


STEP E - Now go back and revise, edit, and polish your paragraph

- check spelling, grammar, mechanics

- does each of your 3 4ESSDs fit perfectly? Which one is weakest? Can you replace it with a better idea, or fix it to make it more clear?

- VERY IMPORTANT: Read it out loud to yourself. Did you leave out or insert any words? Sometimes we have a tendency to skip over these things when writing. Or, when we read our words out loud exactly as written (verbatim) we realize that we forgot to add something important.

Are your ideas on the page perfectly clear? Fix them.


STEP F
- Rewrite the paragraph in your BEST handwriting. This is for 50 points so it had better be amazing!

16 comments:

  1. Hi Mr.Chappell I was wondering if it was ok to correct are outline. Like with pen and highlighter's.

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  2. could we skip tis assignment because you said one was free.

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  3. Sure. But you might want to wait until I give you feedback on it before writing the final draft.

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  4. Q: could we skip this assignment because you said one was free.

    A: Nope. Not this one. The others were only worth 5 points each. If you read the last line of Step F, this is worth 50.

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  5. u should put what chapter it is more clearly because i dont know what we have to do for chapter 15!!!!!!!

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  6. wait so all the essay is do MONDAY????

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  7. when is the essay due?

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  8. Q: wait so all the essay is do MONDAY????

    A: Did you read the instructions?????

    Q: when is the essay due?

    A: Did you read the instructions? It seems that being able to read instructions is something we should maybe work on and talk about, as this is what it says right above:

    "READ THIS FIRST: If you are logging in during the break, you will want to go to the left sidebar and pull up Chapter XIV, where we left off Friday 2/1/2010. This was Friday's home work for the day we left. This will be due on Monday.

    I decided to put the future blogs out early for those who are at home and want to work ahead over the break.

    This NOT going to be required for when we get back, but will console those eager readers who don't want to lose the scent of the hunt!

    You will be expected to continue reading in class and to to turn in your journals at the normal due date.

    If you read the other blogs after XIV, there will be SPOILERS!

    Enjoy your Spring Break!"

    I hope this helps. Really, I don't know how to make it more clear.

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  9. Q: u should put what chapter it is more clearly because i dont know what we have to do for chapter 15!!!!!!!

    A: Did you follow the directions to click on the Chapter XIV like it asked you to? For Chapter XV click on that link. Guys, come on. Read the directions before you panic. It's not that complicated.

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  10. what is 4essd????????????????????????????????????

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  11. Q: what is 4essd????????????????????????????????????

    A: The 4ESSD is what we've been talking about all year. We used it for writing the first essay in the fall. There have been several mini-lessons about the concept on this blog. Have you been reading? You might want to go back and re-read different mini-lessons to grasp the concept. Please try to pay attention in the future. It will save you a lot of frustration. :)

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  12. we dont have to do this "manuscript" section during break right?

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  13. Q: we dont have to do this "manuscript" section during break right?

    A: All you have to do is where we left off, Chapter XIV. Those were the instructions on Friday, and those were the instructions on the top log.

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  14. When is the essay due?

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  15. Q: When is the essay due?

    A: This week we will be wrapping up 15,16,epilogue and manuscript. We have a short week and the manuscript is the essay in two parts (two days). So we'll assign 15 Monday night, 16 Tuesday night, Epilogue Thursday night. There is no Friday for you guys, so the Manuscript will be broken into Monday night and Tuesday night. That makes the essay due on the second Wednesday after we get back.

    I think that's right.

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  16. my god it was wargrave. I thought it was Claythorne all along.

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