Thursday, January 29, 2015



WRITING REASONING STRATEGIES TOOLBOX

Not all of these tools/strategies will apply to every quote or CERS.

Choose the strategies that make the most sense.  Also, obviously, they do not need to be in any set order. 

- IN YOUR OWN WORDS:  Describe in what the quote is saying in your plain language. “In other words…”

- DISMANTLE THE EVIDENCE:  Pick apart what the Evidence is doing.  Ask yourself, why did I choose this evidence in the first place?  And then tell why.

- DEFINE UNKNOWN TERMS:  Explain any terms in your quote that require any explanation. “What the author means by the word ________ is…”

- WHAT, WHY, HOW -- Remember, evidence is the “what” but the function of your reasoning is to tell why and how.  Explain it to death.  Point out every detail.  Own it.

- CONNECT THE DOTS:  You will probably need to tell how different ideas in the quote connect to other ideas in the rest of the story.  Show relationships between the ideas in order to make your point.

- EXAMINE A HYPOTHETICAL SITUATION:  You may want to explore a “what if…” scenarios based around your evidence in order to further demonstrate your point.  For example, “If she knew that Victor was lying, she either didn’t care or found a way to justify his lie to herself….”

- REVERSE ANTITHESIS ARGUMENT:  You may want to explore what would happen if your claim were not true when put against this particular evidence.  If the evidence is strong, the counter claim should seem obviously not true.

- USE LOGIC:  You can examine facts and how they connect in order to prove your point.  If A is true and B is not true, then C must be true also.  That sort of thinking goes a long way. 

- MAKE A METAPHORICAL CORRELATION:  You may want to find a parallel line of thinking in order to draw a sharp contrast to your position.  For example, “If one were to think of the planet earth as like an aquarium, and the increase in carbon dioxide gases as like bleach being poured into the fishes’ water…”

- ASK A RHETORICAL QUESTION:  Direct the line of thinking of the reader toward a direction that you want by asking the reader a rhetorical question.  Then answer the question as a means of controlling the logic and forcing the reader into a conclusion that agrees with your point.  For example:  “Does Scrooge want to be forgotten after he dies?  Of course he doesn’t.  Being forgotten after one passes on is almost as if you were never alive…”

FINALLY –

- ON THE LAST LINE CONNECT BACK TO YOUR CLAIM.  Restate your claim with different words and state “because” to summarize your overall reasoning.

Tuesday, January 27, 2015

BOARD NOTES FROM CERS CHRISTMAS CAROL MICRO-CONFERNCES

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PROMPT

When thinking about Charles Dickens’ novella “A Christmas Carol” (as dramatized by Frederick Gaines), some might believe that the spirit of Jacob Marley most influenced him to change from being a miser to being a giver.  Others might argue that it was one of the visiting ghost (of Christmas Past, Present, or Future).  Make a claim as to which character most influenced Ebenezer Scrooge and support it with relevant evidence and reasoning.  Finally, synthesize your argument.

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SWITCHING ORDER – BE CLEAR
Although some might argue that he made a bad choice to lie about knowing French, the fact of the matter is that it was a good choice.

It was a good choice to lie about knowing French, although some might argue that he made a bad choice.

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NAMES AND CAPS
the Ghost of Christmas Past
the Ghost of Christmas Present
the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come (or Future).
Jacob Marley
Ebenezer Scrooge

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WORD BANK

Although
Despite
In spite of
Contrary to what

Some
Others
Readers
Critics

Might argue
Believe
Put forward the argument that
Might think

the fact of the matter
the truth is
The basic reality of the situation is

Ebenezer Scrooge
Mr. Scrooge
Scrooge
Ebenezer
The old miser


Miser
Penny pincher
overly thrifty
Stingy, cheap
money-grubbing
charitably-challenged
Misanthrope
Misanthropic
Geezer
curmudgeon

Giver
humanist
contributor
charitable
Benevolent
Philanthropist
philanthropy



Influenced
Impacted
Changed
Shifted

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TRANSITION WORDS






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EVIDENCE

Questions to consider:

Is it the very best sentence (or sentences) available to support my claim?

At what point should my quote begin?

At what point should my quote end?

Is it too long?

Is it too short?

Are there unnecessary parts at the beginning, in the middle, or in the end that don’t speak to my point or might confuse the reader?  (Use ellipses)

What page number is it located on?

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 Quotes
“They left the class together.  Teresa asked him if he would help her with her French,” (25).

Dialog within Quotes:
“They left the class together.  Teresa asked him if he would help her with her French.  ‘Sure, anytime,’ Victor said,” (25).

Quote only:
“Second Spirit (imitating Scrooge). ‘If he be like to die, he had better do it and decrease the surplus population,’” (266).

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Using Elipseses
At the front
“…asked him if he would help her with her French.  ‘Sure, anytime,’ Victor said,” (25).

In the middle
“They left the class together.  Teresa asked him...  ‘Sure, anytime,’ Victor said,” (25).

At the end
“They left the class together.  Teresa asked him if he would help her…” (25).

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SECTIONS SO FAR…

1.            CLAIM – Title, Author, Summary
2.            CLAIM – Counter Claim/Claim
3.            EVIDENCE – Quote, Formatting
4.            EVIDENCE – SET UP CONTEXT

SETTING UP CONTEXT:

Questions that the reader might have:

                What is happening in the scene up to that point?
                Who is speaking to whom?
                What is their relationship with each other?
                Does the quote refer to anything that the reader won’t know about?  (example:  chains)

Assume that the audience is unfamiliar with the story.

Notice that this is very different than your story summary in your introduction or Claim section.  This is focused in on the particular scene and not the overall story.

Pretend that you are explaining the scene to a grandparent.  Don’t assume that they know what you know.

Keep it short, maybe two to three sentences.

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