Thursday, November 7, 2013

Revising Writing - Comparison Contrast Essay - "Artful Defense"

Copy and paste this rough draft into Criterion and then edit it to perfection:

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Artful Defense

A martrial art is a system of self-defents that can also be a competitive sport.  People practices martial arts for physical fitnes, mental dissiplin, spiritual developpment, and other reasons.  Some martial arts, such as tai chi (ty chee), also teaches healing skills, including deep breatheing and meditation.  Most martial arts practiced tody, including judo, karate, and jujitsu, has their origins in China korea and japan.  In modern times, asian and American moovies have increased the popularity of martial arts.  This essay looks at to popular forms of martial arts:  taekwondo and ku fu

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You should be able to find:

4 Capitalization Errors
3 Language Usage Errors
2 Comma Errors
1 Period Error
6 Spelling Errors.

Good luck!

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