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Expert Sentence
Fudge, / a portly little man / in a long, pinstriped cloak,
/ looked cold and exhausted.
JChapps’ Sentence
Skywalker, a grizzled, bearded hermit in a brown cloth robe,
appeared haggard and ancient.
Will’s Sentence:
He, a small, plump child in corny, oversized clothing,
looked crazy and happy.
Olivia’s Sentence:
Maddie, a humorous young girl in a textured, pink shirt,
laughed loudly and proudly.
Maeve’s Sentence :
Marcus, a weird little man in a funny, Boy Scouts shirt,
looked tired and fashionable.
Sam’s Sentence:
Alex, a taller teenage boy in black, oversized glasses,
looked tired and clumsy.
Michael’s sentence
Stephen Curry, a choking overrated man, in a clown suit,
bandwagon jersey, looked small and flimsy.
Zayd’s Sentence
Mesut Özil, a powerful midfielder wearing bright, neon
shoes, seemed aggressive and tireless.
Brody’s Sentence
Michonne, a strong, brave woman, in torn, raggedy clothes,
seemed infuriated and anxious to leave the prison.
Drake’s Sentence:
Alex, a built little man in a tight, super hero costume,
looked heroic and powerful.
Ella’s Sentence:
Sparky, a fierce giant dog in a baggy, salt-and-pepper
hoodie, appeared tired and overwhelmed.
Seth’s Sentence:
Jack, a small and enthusiastic boy in a loose, Michigan
jersey, seemed happy and satisfied.
Kiersten’s Sentence
Buddy, a wild little dog with a silky, brindle coat,
appeared excited and happy.
Nyla’s Sentence
Emma, a sporty defensive specialist in a black, comfortable
Unified uniform, felt sore and drained.
Olivia’s Sentence
Yuki, a mysterious young man in a neat, clean school
uniform, looked warm and joyful.
Gabi’s Sentence:
Christina, a feisty little woman in a lengthy, white lab
coat, seemed finally worn out and weary.
Madison’s Sentence
Jenna, a happy, pretty woman in a yellow, summery dress,
looked beautiful and pure.
Norah’s sentence
Pudding, a delightfully yummy treat, in a short, rustic
container, seemed gross and smelly.
Marki’s sentence
Bella, a funny, tiny girl with very curly hair, felt happy
and excited.
Cayden’s sentence
Sam, a happy little boy with cool, new shoes, looked quick
and fashionable.
Drew’s sentence
Josh, a chubby short kid in a long-sleeved, green Vineyard
Vines shirt, looked hungry and stressed.
103
Expert Sentence:
From every hill slope came the trickle of running water, the
music of unseen fountains.
Mr. Chappell’s Sentence:
Upon every mountain peak came the rumble of distant thunder,
the clash of invisible titans.
Collin’s Sentence:
From everyone in the office came the sense of boredom, the
intention of unhappy employees.
Kai’s Sentence:
From every classroom came the feeling of boredom, the
disappointment of being in school.
Jacob’s Sentence:
From neither ghost town came the sounds of civilization, the
pandemonium of daily life.
Bryce’s Sentence:
From every camera angle came the view of confetti falling,
the image of champions being born.
Jack’s Sentence:
From every school corner came the inevitable torrent of
happy students, the sign of a day’s end.
Jonah’s Sentence
From every stadium seat came the boom of screaming fans, a
joy to champions’ ears.
Brendan’s sentence
To every mountain side came the struggle of creating base
camp, a long uphill battle against the cold.
Erin’s Sentence:
From every room came the laugh of cheerful people, a happy
sound to everyone.
Tyler’s sentence:
In all baseball stadiums comes the clamorous tumult of
troublesome fans, the noises of unbearable screeches.
Jack’s Sentence:
Around every city building came the roar of nearby screams,
the cheering of diehard fans.
Jonny’s Sentence
In every basketball gym occurs the yelling of a mad coach,
the sound of a crazy man.
Eric’s Sentence
For every gentle breeze / came the crash / of powerful
waves, the rhythm in a song.
Lily’s Sentence:
From every beat came the booming of loud singing, the music
of pop.
Miles’ Sentence:
From every big boss fight came the rush of rare loot, the
flow of great items.
Sofia’s Sentence
In every Bamboo tree came the breaking of sturdy branches,
the result of hungry pandas.
Jacob’s sentence:
On every river came a run of fresh salmon, a feast for
hungry grizzly bears.
Clara’s Sentence
In each theater came performers ready to portray a new
character, the stars of the night.
Aristotle’s sentence
From every tree top came the flow of falling leaves, the
outcome of Fall.
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Expert Sentence
The guidepost of her ancestors, the North Star would soon be
visible and would point the way when the birds had all gone South.
JChapps Sentence
The hub of the universe, the Well of Worlds would soon be
apparent and would provide portals for the time travellers to slip between the
chrono-streams.
Bella’s Sentence:
A sanctuary from the outside world, her bedroom would be
visible and would show the evidence when the argument had really gone south.
Olivia’s Sentence:
The bloodline of the city, the highways would soon be
visible and would have constant jolts until rush hour was over.
Bryce’s Sentence:
The guidepost of the greats, the Lombardi Trophy would soon
be within reach and would paint the way when their motives have all gone down.
Jackson's Sentence:
The leader of his team, the quarterback would be a star and
lead the way so the Lions could win the game.
Nolan’s Sentence
The clue of the national treasure, the unknown map would
soon be found and would guide the seekers to the exact location when the numbers
had all been encrypted.
Ben’s Sentence
The energy source of the factory, the machine would soon
come to a halt and the blaring sounds would conclude when the workers had gone
to lunch.
Franco’s Sentence
The primary target of the job of his life, the suitcase
would shortly be stolen and would contain the unmarked bills after the bank had
been leveled down.
Ryan’s Sentence
The worn wool of her loved one, the sweater would soon be
stained and would tell the story when her voice had gone silent.
Nicholas’ Sentence:
The compass of the night, the lighthouse would become lit
and mark the port when the sun had gone down.
Ella’s Sentence:
The staple food of her father, the peach pie would
momentarily be devoured and would be replaced once the tarts had all been
consumed.
Seth’s Sentence:
The guide to the nearest restaurant, the G.P.S. would soon
direct the way to Coney Island when the family was hungry
Drake’s Sentence:
The map of his journey,
the Northern lights would eventually be disappearing and wouldn’t lead
the way when their animals are all gone.
Noah’s Sentence
The one force that kept him going, the fire within him to
find his missing sister burned like a fierce inferno.
Katie’s Sentence
A stream of beaming light, a sunrise would eventually be
seen and would show the motion of the waves crashing onto the beach.
Max’s sentence:
The sign of their army, the flag of Rome would soon burn and
mark the end to when the thousand year old empire fell.
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Expert Sentence:
In the locker room, I packed for the trip to New Orleans,
the road-trip that would change my life and destiny as an athlete forever.
Mr. Chappell’s Sentence:
Inside the classroom, she studied for her exam in French,
the test that would alter the trajectory of her academic career towards
becoming a foreign exchange student for a summer.
Bella’s Sentence:
In the meadow, I walked through the flowers along the grass,
the blooming lilies that would open my eyes and my mind with the truth.
Zak’s Sentence:
At the rink, we prepared for the game ahead, the
championship that would determine our
season and ranking as a team for the season.
Sam’s Sentence:
On the field, I got ready for the football tournament, the
last game that would decide if we made it to the playoffs as a wildcard.
In the locker room, I packed for the trip to New Orleans, /
the road-trip that would change my life and destiny as an athlete forever.
Jacob’s Sentence:
In the lively garrison, I prepared for the campaign to the
rampart, the trek that would change the worlds of many soldiers as drastically
as possible.
Sydney’s Sentence
In the kitchen, I prepared dinner for the Queen, the three
course meal that would change her life and taste buds forever.
Brody’s Sentence
Inside the labyrinth, / I trudged through on my journey
through the mazes to the demon lich King Acererak, / the quest that would set
me closer to the prize and fame / as the greatest gunter ever.
Andrew’s Sentence:
In the huge house, I ran for the basement by the door, the
area that I had always remembered and
hated as a man forever.
Ethan’s Sentence
In the player's room, we prepared for the journey to
Chicago, the adventure that could decide the place and fate of our team
temporarily.
Aadi’s Sentence:
In the jungle, I sniffed for the smell of animals, the scent
that would impact my journey as a hunter forever.
Sam’s Sentence:
In the abandoned mansion, I explored for the sight of
ghosts, the hunt that would change my mind and thinking towards the belief of
afterlife.
Ashley’s Sentence:
By the old desk, I studied for the admittance exam, the nine hundred point test that could affect
my future college and my education.
Nia’s Sentence:
Behind the curtain, I prepared for the performance in New
York, the show that would change my career and future as an actress forever.
Marley’s Sentence:
In the Urgent Care, she thought about the recent game on the
field, the game that provided her injury and affliction in her life
chronically.
Olivia’s Sentence:
In the Sohma Family’s past, anyone who found out their
secret of the Zodiac curse had their memory wiped, Tohru Honda had changed that
outcome from the day she found out forever.
Sana’s sentence
Inside the military aircraft, I packed the bombs for this
bloody war, the combat that may end my life and my future as a human being
forever.
Brooke’s sentence
In the library, I worked on an essay to turn in, the paper
that could change my grade and GPA as a student for the rest of the year.
Lilli’s sentence:
Past the woods, I followed the curious dog deeper into the
field, the white lab that had lead me to some of the happiest moments of my
life as my days unfolded.
Marki’s sentence
In the bakery, she prepared the cake for the party, the
amazing treat that would let everyone look and taste it at the birthday
celebration.
Josh’s sentence:
Outside the Principal’s office, Drew waited for mean Mr.
Chappell to reprimand him, the teacher who would soon be giving him an after
school detention as playing his “diss-track” on the P.A. system during the
staff meeting.
Fern’s sentence:
In the makeshift tent, we prepared for the hike through the
Rocky mountains, the trek that would distinguish my score and future as a
certified guide in the Sierra Club.
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EXPERT SENTENCE
In New York, / the most important state in any Presidential
race, / and a state where politics were particularly sensitive / to the views
of various nationality and minority groups, Democrats were joyous / and
Republicans angry and gloomy.
Mr. Chappell’s Sentence
In Los Angeles, the most important city in the entertainment
industry and a location where commerce is particularly interested in the work
of artists and musicians, actors were embarrassed and Price Waterhouse was
financially ruined.
Janel’s Sentence:
Under the sun, an ancient clock that never fails, and a
giant ball of fire which is bright enough to blind you at a single glance,
buildings were in ruins and people were in danger and panic.
Mitch’s sentence:
In Ashfeld, the most important region in any campaign of
war, and an area where battles were particularly fierce about who won knights
or vikings, knights are victorious and vikings were defeated.
Megan’s Sentence:
In swim, the most important sport out of any other athletic
to me, and a sport where breaststroke is particularly difficult in the views of
many backstroke and butterfly swimmers, coaches are excited and disqualifiers
casual and nonchalant.
Anna’s sentence:
In the White House, the most valued house in any state, and
a house where laws were carefully selected to the views of thousands of the
people in the United States and the Congress, many were thrilled, while
citizens who propose a bill nervous and scared.
Ben’s Sentence
During the Super Bowl, the most entertaining pastime of the
football season, and a crucial game for the teams playing in the view of a
variety of different fan groups, Patriots fans were astonished and Falcons fans
were grim and irate.
James’ sentence
In Birmingham, the most beautiful city in Michigan, and a
city where people were pretty wealthy to the views of others and outsiders,
kids were in school and adults were out and at work.
Erin’s Sentence:
At the park, the biggest playground in the neighborhood, and
a place for Ashley to bring her dog with a stick to throw and fetch, kids were
excited to see the animal and the cats were terrified.
Ashley’s sentence
In the store, the most exciting place Erin could be, loaded
with clothes and shoes and various types of accessories and bags, she grabbed
everything with excitement and cashiers hurried to check out customers.
Caleb’s Sentence
In Ohio, the most important state in the amusement park
world, and a place where the breeze from Lake Erie was felt by the people of
different cultures and origins, basketball fans thrived and football fans
disappointed and outraged.
Trevor’s Sentence
In Michigan, the most important state in the United States,
and a place where there was four seasons for everyone of different cities and
counties, parents were happy and kids playful and cheerful.
Reese’s Sentence
In the park, the most soothing place in the busy city, and a
place where you can witness all of nature’s beautiful and delicate scenery,
birds were chirping and children laughing and playing.
Angela’s Sentence
In the deep blue, the most colorful place on earth, and a
place where sea life live in peace, to where people travel and enjoy, where
fish swim happily, and dolphins dance beautifully.
Nyla’s Sentence
In the Amazon Rainforest, the largest tropical jungle in the
world, and a wilderness where many species of animals were hiding deep in the undergrowth
of giant trees and damp moss, loggers were thrilled and environmentalists
ashamed and bitter.
SANA’S SENTENCE
In Michigan, the most important state for the automobile
industry, and a state surrounded by all the great lakes with various fishes and
animals and coyotes, Lansing being the capital and Detroit being the heart of
Michigan.
Iman’s Sentence
In Disneyland, the most enjoyable place in the whole world,
and a place where dreams are relatively not a fantasy to the countless amount
of younger children and childish adults, rides are exciting, and imaginary
cartoons intriguing and humorous.
Brooke’s Sentence
Around Belmont Bay, the very smallest town in booming
California; a rural land where citizens were oddly interested in the
whereabouts and small details of your day, I was panicked and my family eager
and enthusiastic.
Norah’s Sentence
In Arizona, one of the hottest areas in the United States,
and a place where people would come for vacation and business trips, children
were excited and parents worn out and drained.
Josh’s sentence
In Josh’s home, a place where Drew would always wear Stinson
Mellor sweatshirts and cause pranks, and the house that was coated in a blanket
of wet pancake mix and dried flour, Drew was pleased and Josh upset and
nauseous.
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