Sentence Composing #136 Gerund Phrases

Expert Sentence:
Eventually Mr. Kato fired a shot into the dark one night, after seeing a face looking in his window.

Mr. Chappell’s Sentence:
Immediately Mrs. Dimson baked a cake in the oven one weekend, after posting an emoticon smiling on her Facebook.

David's sentence:
Eventually the sergeant took a shot into the poorly lit room, after seeing the alien's many arms in the hallway.

Leo’s Sentence:
At some point the cop got his gun out and pointed it into the dark, after spotting what he thought to be an intruder.

Finn’s Sentence:
After a while Dr. Steinbeck flipped a coin into the fountain, without noticing a tile shifting in its basin.

Zak’s Sentence:
Right when the player shot the puck into the goalie’s glove one game, after he was regretting the penalty he took.

NATHAN’S SENTENCE
Immediately Blake Griffin threw a punch at the wall into the bricks, after finding out that his team lost in game 7 of the series.

Kieran’s Sentence
At last Ponyboy woke up next to the fountain that night, after coughing up water onto the ground.

Andrew’s Sentence
Eventually the Warriors choked again in the most crucial game of the year, before looking into the sad faces of the players after the game.

Matthew’s Sentence
Immediately John woke up to his phone’s clock like every morning, after sleeping all night and playing basketball in his dreams.

Caleb’s Sentence
Suddenly Tom Brady threw a bullet into the endzone one game, before noticing a defender running at his target.

Jack’s Sentence
Immediately, Old Mcdonald pointed the gun at the barn one  morning, after seeing a blood stain in the dirt.

Nia’s Sentence
Finally Ms. Hinton finished the masterpiece in her college ruled notebook, after receiving criticism from her editor.

Jonny’s Sentence
Finally Jacob shot a ball into the hoop one day, after watching a video on basketball.

Lily’s Sentence
Later Mr. Krabs found a penny in Bikini Bottom last night, after working at The Krusty Krab.

Katie’s Sentence
Eventually Ava rested her head on the water one day, after getting a terrible burn on her face.

Tino’s Sentence
Immediately John fired the rifle into the heart of one elk, after pushing off the safety of the gun.

Megan’s Sentence:
Finally Angel launched a grenade into the nearing army, after seeing a rifle aiming at his temple.


Marki’s sentence
Eventually the fun rollercoaster was done on the bright sunny day, after getting off she wanted to go again.

Ava’s Sentence
Finally, Katie angrily shoved a book into her locker one afternoon, after failing her math test during first hour.

Curran’s Sentence
Finally, Mr. Smith released the class into the long, chaotic hallways, after teaching a lengthy and boring history lesson.

Cayden’s Sentence
Suddenly the man sprinted into the forest, after hearing a siren in the distance.