Check Bric for Narrative Revision Wave 1

	Approaching Expectations (C)	Meets Expectations (B)	Exceeds Expectations (A)
Sensory Detail (Not Sight or Sound)	Example: She felt sad. (this is an emotional feeling, not a sensory feeling)	Example: The ground felt cold and clammy.	Example: The effervescent scent of the chlorine tickled my nostrils and conjured memories of long hours of swim practice.
Dialog	Some errors.  Or only has only one word or line of dialogue.	Error free.  Multiple speakers.	Error free.  Multiple speakers.  Captures illusion of each character’s natural voices and is used with precision to advance the plot.
Adjective, Adverb, or Appositive Phrase	Used words that might be confused with a phrase.	Used a phrase correctly with correct punctuation.   Follows examples from sentence composing.	Used a phrase correctly with correct punctuation.  Follows the more challenging examples from sentence composing.  The phrase itself demonstrates excellent vocabulary, creative expression, figurative language, or otherwise demonstrates excellent control of language.
Dashes, colons, or semicolons	Uses the punctuation, but it is used incorrectly or in a very limited fashion.	Successfully uses punctuation correctly.  Follows examples from sentence composing.	Successfully uses punctuation masterfully, demonstrating superior control of the language. Follows the more challenging examples from sentence composing.