Tuesday, December 20, 2016

All Sentence Composing Sentence So Far #001 - #070


This is made available to assist students in completing the sentence composing journal check tomorrow as a convenience for those who were sick, absent, or otherwise missing sentences.  Good luck!

#001. To say he was handsome would be a gross exaggeration.

#002. Now began the happiest times that Caspian had ever known.

#003. The idea of cutting and sewing the dress by herself was novel and exciting.

#004. The meat, dry-cured for the feeding of the dogs, hung in the smoke-house.

#005. Four dolphins, swimming side by side, were pushing the raft through the water.

#006. In the town, actually within sight of Charlie’s house, was an enormous chocolate factory!

#007. The one food that Oompa-Loompas longed for more than any other was the cacao bean.

#008. Returning with two strips of meat for the small dragon, Eragon found the dragon sitting on the windowsill, watching the moon.

#009. Over the last few hours, a gusting wind had blown a good deal of loose brush down to the bottom of the hill near the little cemetery.

#010. To hunt the whole mountain until the dragon had caught the thief and had torn and trampled him was the dragon’s one thought.



#011. The tiny dragon lost interest in Eragon and awkwardly explored the room.

#012. The fierce black eyes of the man and the laughing blue eyes of the goose girl met across the
strip of swamp.

#013. Driving snow, a wind that cut like a hot knife, and darkness forced them to look for a camping place.

#014. She and her father unrolled the paper across the kitchen and knelt with a box of crayons between them.

#015. Dudley, who was so large his bottom drooped over either side of the kitchen chair, grinned and turned to Harry.

#016. He felt something cold on his ankles and looked under the tablecloth and saw two more of the huge worms around his ankles.

#017. The four children and the Dwarf went down to the water’s edge, pushed off the boat with some difficulty, and scrambled aboard.

#018. The wicked eyes, the ancient face, the fierce look, the enormous size of the two-and-a-half-ton hippo required very rapid action.

#019. The tall skinny Bean and dwarfish pot-bellied Bunce drove their machines like maniacs, raced the motors, and made the shovels dig at a terrific speed.

#020. One of the creatures high above the trees raised its head to listen, then flew off, picked three flowers from a tree growing near the river, and brought them over to the children.



#021. As they entered the building, Sadako felt a pang of fear.

#022. His voice seemed sad, although he was trying to be cheerful.

#023. After the other children had disappeared,  she remained at her desk, quiet and thoughtful.

#024. All the eyes of Paris were fixed on the Eiffel Tower, which slowly drooped over like soft rubber.

#025. As the door opened, Fortinbras streaked in, panting from exhaustion, wet and shiny as a seal.

#026. They all saw it this time, a whiskered furry face which had looked out at them from behind a tree.

#027. All in all, he thought everyone would be much happier if he sat in the closet, but, unfortunately, his desk didn’t fit.

#028. When the seal was dead, the bear attended first to herself and got rid of the wet from her coat before it could freeze.

#029. She waved her hand to land a mock spank on Gilly’s bottom, but after her hand swept the air, / Gilly’s bottom  / along with the rest of her was well down the hall.

#030.  Sometimes now, in the hush of the night, when the moon was full and the light lay in silver bands across the pandanus mats,  and all the village was sleeping,  Mafatu awoke and sat upright.



#031.  Eragon dropped his eyes, abashed.  “I’m sorry.”

#032. “A promise is a promise,” Hermione reminded Harry bossily.

#033. “Don’t be,” said Brom as he shifted his arm.  “It happens to everyone.”

#034. “Colonel Graff,” he said, “I just want to go back and swim in the lake.”

#035.  “Here is the Mirror of Galadriel,” she said. “I have brought you here so you may look in it, if you will.”

#036.  “I am going to transmit the memory of snow,” the old man said, and placed his hands on Jonas’s bare back.

#037.  “How come you like fights, Darry?” I asked, looking up at him as he stood behind me, leaning in the kitchen doorway.

#038.  “Blast it, Jonny,” Dally growled as we flew along the red road, “why didn’t you think of turning yourself in five days ago?”

#039.  Johnny had been quietly finishing his fifth barbecue sandwich, but now he announced: “We’re goin’ back and turn ourselves in.”

#040.  Peter let his hand tremble a little, and he said, “If you think I should stop, I think I might be able to keep things under control this time.   I really do.”



#041 I saw my seat – the only empty one in the room.

#042 Their faces either look grim or kind – depending on the husband's disposition.

#043 The dog was not much to look at – a mixture of Georgia redbone hound and bulldog.

#044The apartment was on the top floor – a small living-room, a small dining-room, a small bedroom,  and a bath.

#045 Even Shuya Nanahara let off steam by listening to that illegally imported rock music – it never went beyond that though.

#046 You're so busy worrying about the Divergent – like my mom –  that you forget to worry about what the leaders are doing.

#047 When I passed the Radley Place for the fourth time that day – twice at a full gallop – my gloom had deepened to match the house.

#048 As for the terrors ahead – for Jess did not fool himself that they were all behind him – you just have to stand up to your fear and not let it squeeze you white.

#049 He beat the creature off with his hands – it was trying to poison him to keep him quiet, as small spiders do to flies – until he remembered his sword and drew it out.

#050 If every single person in this room made it a rule that wherever you are, whenever you can, you will try to act a little kinder than necessary -- the world really would be a better place.



#051. I gave her happy memories:  a ride on a merry-go-round, a kitten to play with, a special toy.

#052. In Maycomb, grown men stood outside in the front yard for only two reasons:  death and politics.

#053. By the dawn, the house smelled of Sunday:  chicken frying, bacon sizzling, and smoke sausages baking.

#054. Animals took shape: yellow giraffes, blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance.

#055. Then the sounds of the forest returned:  the first tentative croak of a tree frog, the buzz of one cicada, and then the full chorus.

#056. In my stillness, I began to notice the animals: strange birds with brilliant plumage, tree lizards with flickering blue tongues, and something that looked like a cross between a rat and a possum.

#057. Like most first-time authors, I was filled with hope and despair upon the book’s publication:  hope that the book might succeed beyond my youthful dreams; despair that I had failed to say anything worth saying.

#058. Not far away was Gollum’s island, of which Bilbo knew nothing, and there in his hiding-place he kept a few wretched oddments, and one very beautiful thing, very beautiful, very wonderful: a ring, a golden ring, a precious ring.

#059. They were like the sounds heard in a dream you have again and again at certain critical turns of life:  the dream of being unprepared for a big exam, the dream of being naked in public, the dream of falling, the dream in which you hurry toward a corner in some strange city, sure your fate lies on the far side.

#060. Under the lightning that flamed in the skies, everything below stood out in clear-cut and shadowless distinctiveness:  the bending trees; the billowy river, white with foam; the driving spray of spume flakes; the dim outlines of the high bluffs on the other side, glimpsed through the drifting clouds; and the slanting veil of rain.



#061  I try to see only the good in him; I try.

#062  Food is a huge problem; so is the situation with the water.

#063  The sound was like the scream of a rabbit caught in an owl’s talons ; my flesh crawled.

#064  He has the audience from the get-go, though; I can hear them laughing, shouting out.

#065  That's the good part of dying; when you've nothing to lose, you run any risk if you want.

#066  Today was the day; today was the day when they would realize what Zaphod had been up to.

#067  Ender did not like to cry and rarely did; now, in less than a day, he had done it three times.

#068  Looking into her eyes was like looking out of a grave from the inside; I was buried in the terror and despair and agony of her gaze.

#069  With the force of a bullet, the wad of chewing gum shot out of the keyhole and straight down Peeve’s left nostril; he whirled upright and zoomed away, cursing.

#070  Parzival, the #1 on the scoreboard, was world famous, and had never felt this way before, even when he played Aech; Art3mis, his rival, was level 50, with money to burn and experience galore.

Monday, December 19, 2016

Expert Sentence #69
With the force of a bullet, the wad of chewing gum shot out of the keyhole and / straight down Peeve’s left nostril; he whirled upright and zoomed away, cursing.

JChapps’ Sentence
Simon Hicks, the #1 recruit on the FBI application scores, was a Harvard graduate, and had not experienced failure before, even when he sprinted against Olympic runner Julia Fitzsimmons; Gregori Noblaski, his chief competitor, was already admitted, with a Glock sidearm to practice and time to study.

Kellie’s Sentence:
With the speed of a cheetah, the tires of the car spun quick on the freeway and straight into the deep side ditch; it flipped over and stood still, stuck.

Jack’s Sentence:
With the size of an elephant, the pile of clothes expanded out of the closet and / knocked down Zak’s bedroom door; he woke up and stared suspiciously, waiting.

Ava’s Sentence
With bad eyesight of a bird, the movers from the pickup truck drove and hit straight into a tree; the movers got out to move the truck and checked out if something was still there, fine.

Enzo’s Sentence:
With the strength of a weightlifter, the insult of John’s intelligence shot out of Carl’s mouth and straight down his heart; he stood upright and walked away, crying.

Jake’s Sentence
With the fight of a boxer, the fists of the player soared through the air and crashed into the referee’s jaw; fans cheered and jumped up, shouting.

Jonny’s Sentence
With the strength of an athlete, the hands of the boy swiftly moved through the air and caught the ball for a touchdown; players jumped and ran on the field, hollering.

Gabi’s Sentence #069:
With the strength of an army, the slithering Occamy broke through the petite teapot and growing fantastically up to the lofty attic; it hid quickly and stared at them, hissing.

Miles Sentence #69:
With the power of his anger, he quickly dragged her through the small village and carried her up to the large castle; he knocked down the door and started attacking them, screaming.



Expert Sentence #70
Parzival, the #1 on the scoreboard,  was world famous, and had never felt this way before, even when he played Aech;  Art3mis,  his rival, was level 50, with money to burn and experience galore.

Kylie’s Sentence  #70
Phelps, the #1 fastest swimmer, was a gold medalist, and had never been scared, even when he swam; Lochte, his biggest rival, are almost the same age, with a speed almost as fast as Phelps.

Hannah’s Sentence  #70
Ida, the #2 in her district, was known throughout the school, and had never seen this type of problem before, even when she took Mrs. Johnson’s class; the most difficult course, advanced studies, had with lots to memorize and an abundance of exams.

Sydney’s Sentence #70
Ashley, the #1 cook in the house, was a world champion, and had never burned something before, even when she made s’mores; Erin, her enemy was even better, with three tv shows and millions of fans.

Michael's Sentence #70
Stephen Curry, the worst player in the league, was nationally known, and had never made a shot before, even when he was in the finals; the Cavaliers, his Kryptonite, was 82-0, with the best player of all time, LeBron James.

Eric’s Sentence #70
Jackson, the only person to sit on a plane wing while it was flying, is widely recognized, and known as a daredevil is going to tightrope walk; a mile, a terrifying mile, across New York City and through wall street.

Elizabeth’s Sentence #70
Katy, the best in the company, was an idol to the studio, and almost never felt so nervous before, even when she was dancing in front of her instructor; Ava, her competitor, was in a professional dance company, with a big stage to dance on and other great dancers to dance with.

Angela’s Sentence #70
The cat, quick to get around, was very small, and could fit into small spaces, even as it got bigger; it got into holes, into vents, dragging dead mice and rats.

Anthea’s Sentence #70
Luna, the 1st suspect of the murder, was mysteriously unknown, apart from the other suspects, even before she killed him; her fear was getting caught, and she did.

Gabi’s Sentence #070:
Esmeralda, the only abnormal princess in the land, was bored endlessly, even when she was happily dancing around; Allison, her best friend, was gone for the week with sites to see and terrains to cross.

Thursday, December 15, 2016

Sentence Composing: Semicolons


#061  I try to see only the good in him; I try.

#062  Food is a huge problem; so is the situation with the water.

#063  The sound was like the scream of a rabbit caught in an owl’s talons ; my flesh crawled.

#064  He has the audience from the get-go, though; I can hear them laughing, shouting out.

#065  That's the good part of dying; when you've nothing to lose, you run any risk if you want.

#066  Today was the day; today was the day when they would realize what Zaphod had been up to.

#067  Ender did not like to cry and rarely did; now, in less than a day, he had done it three times.

#068  Looking into her eyes was like looking out of a grave from the inside; I was buried in the terror and despair and agony of her gaze.

#069  With the force of a bullet, the wad of chewing gum shot out of the keyhole and straight down Peeve’s left nostril; he whirled upright and zoomed away, cursing.

#070  Parzival, the #1 on the scoreboard, was world famous, and had never felt this way before, even when he played Aech; Art3mis, his rival, was level 50, with money to burn and experience galore.

Friday, December 9, 2016

Extra Credit Options & Retake Details


Several students and parents have been asking about extra credit options as well as clarification of the retake.  Allow me to set the record straight:

EXTRA CREDIT OPTIONS

1)  Tissue Paper or Kleenex.  We're heading into cold season and the school district no longer supplies classrooms with these important, basic items.  So in an effort to make our learning community hygienic and comfortable, students may bring in a box or two for 5 points extra credit maximum.

2) Holocaust Museum Write-Up.   After reading Anne Frank, as an extension and enrichment activity if anyone had gone in the last 6 months or goes to the museum and writes up a paragraph on the experience, they may bet 10 points of extra credit.

3) The Birberry Awards.  Students may participate in the Birberry Awards here at school and get 5 points for each book they complete with passed quizzes.  The documentation must from our media center specialist.


GRAMMAR TEST RETAKE

Students may take the retake with a parent signature on their post test as well as a completed study packet on Flex Fridays or by appointment during lunch or rec.  The retake grade is capped at 85%, or a B.

Thank You,
Mr. Jonathan Chappell

Deep Sentence Study and Deliberate Practice - Colons



Master List for Quiz on Tuesday 12/13/16

051. I gave her happy memories:  a ride on a merry-go-round, a kitten to play with, a special toy.

052. In Maycomb, grown men stood outside in the front yard for only two reasons:  death and politics.

053. By the dawn, the house smelled of Sunday:  chicken frying, bacon sizzling, and smoke sausages baking.

054. Animals took shape: yellow giraffes, blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance.

055. Then the sounds of the forest returned:  the first tentative croak of a tree frog, the buzz of one cicada, and then the full chorus.

056. In my stillness, I began to notice the animals: strange birds with brilliant plumage, tree lizards with flickering blue tongues, and something that looked like a cross between a rat and a possum.

057. Like most first-time authors, I was filled with hope and despair upon the book’s publication:  hope that the book might succeed beyond my youthful dreams; despair that I had failed to say anything worth saying.

058. Not far away was Gollum’s island, of which Bilbo knew nothing, and there in his hiding-place he kept a few wretched oddments, and one very beautiful thing, very beautiful, very wonderful: a ring, a golden ring, a precious ring.

059. They were like the sounds heard in a dream you have again and again at certain critical turns of life:  the dream of being unprepared for a big exam, the dream of being naked in public, the dream of falling, the dream in which you hurry toward a corner in some strange city, sure your fate lies on the far side.

060. Under the lightning that flamed in the skies, everything below stood out in clear-cut and shadowless distinctiveness:  the bending trees;  the billowy river, white with foam; the driving spray of spume flakes; the dim outlines of the high bluffs on the other side, glimpsed through the drifting clouds; and the slanting veil of rain.

Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Anne Frank Quotations


“…in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart.”

“In the long run, the sharpest weapon of all is a kind and gentle spirit.”

“Human greatness does not lie in wealth or power, but in character and goodness. People are just people, and all people have faults and shortcomings, but all of us are born with a basic goodness.”

“The best example of this is our own helpers, who have managed to pull us through so far and will hopefully bring us safely to shore… They put on their most cheerful expressions, bring flowers and gifts for birthdays and holidays and are always ready to do what they can. That's something we should never forget; while others display their heroism in battle or against the Germans, our helpers prove theirs every day by their good spirits and affection."

Sgudent Examples of Sentence #58


EXPERT SENTENCE:
Not far away was Gollum’s island, of which Bilbo knew nothing,  and there in his hiding-place he kept a few wretched oddments, and one very beautiful thing, very beautiful, very wonderful:  a ring, a golden ring, a precious ring.


JChapp’s Sentence:
Not far to the North awaited General Lee’s hidden regiment, of which Captain Buchanan knew very little, and there behind the ridge Lee kept a few sharp shooters, and one very talented, very dangerous new recruit: an expert, a demolitions expert, an expert who knew how to bring damnation and hellfire!


Anna’s Sentence:
Not far South laid the dreadful Nazi camp, which Anne was very frightened of, and there under the mattress Mr. Frank kept very few special documents, and one very dangerous thing, very pretty thing, very important thing: a sharp knife, a silver knife, a beautiful knife.


Jackson’s Sentence:
Seemingly very close was his house, of which James saw, but there he tripped falling hard he felt something on his clean face, a very sticky thing, very icky, very disgusting: gum, purple gum, a foul gum.


Alex’s Sentence:
Not that far from Skull Mountain, which the kids knew nothing of, and in the caverns there lay a few large boulders and tiny pebbles, and one very shiny object, very out-of-this-world, very amazing: a chest, a golden chest, an extraordinary chest.


Zak’s Sentence:
Close by was Dave’s Pro Shop, that Jack knew nothing of, and there in the way back he kept a few pieces of gear, and one very new thing, very new, very nice: a skate, a custom skate, a great skate.


Ashley’s Sentence:
Very far away was Cassie’s castle, of which I had never heard, and there in the castle she kept a couple of beautiful treasures, and one very majestic trinquet, very majestic, very rare: a crown, a priceless crown.


Aadi’s Sentence:
Below the stadium was the Champion's locker, of which everyone knew about, and in the captain’s locker were his possessions, and captain’s golden jewel, his motivation: a photo of his beloved family, his kids and his wife.


Ella’s Sentence:
Far down below was Joe’s jail, of which Allen knew little, and there in his secret door he hid a couple green hats, and one very scary thing, very frightening, very terrible: a dragon, a ginormous dragon, a human-eating dragon.


Elizabeth’s Sentence:
Near the heavily guarded fence was the dungeon, which Amy knew nothing about, and down in the nearly empty space was a couple rusted items, and one very valuable object, very valuable, very expensive: the crown, the king’s crown, a jeweled crown.

James’ Sentence
Not far away was Zayd’s house, where he stayed, and there in his closet he kept a few pairs of pants, and one very nice thing, very nice, very wonderful: a soccer jersey, his jersey, a precious jersey.


Jonah’s Sentence
Not far away was the bench, upon which Steph sat resting, and there sitting next to him was Doris Burke, two legends, very good, very humble: the man, the myth, the legend.


David’s Sentence:
Not far away was home, of which he knew all, and there at home he slept, a long strong sleep, and one very strange noise, very strange, very scary: a clap, a roaring clap, a thunderous clap.


Ellie’s Sentence:      
Just down the road was my house, where no one ever entered, and in this secret home I had a few prized possessions, and one thing no one could ever take away from me, no one, ever: my memories, special memories, so many special memories.


Katie’s sentence
Not far away was Julia’s cabin, of which Bella knew very little, and there in her bedroom she kept a few precious bracelets, and one very memorable thing, very memorable, very important: a key, a silver key, a magnificent key.


Marley’s Sentence
Across the room was Sullivan’s box, which Nina had no idea of, and there in her secrecy, she kept a couple of her most prized possessions, especially one meaningful thing, very meaningful, very personal: a letter, a heart-wrenching letter, a love letter.


Brooke’s Sentence
Not far away was Christmas, a time she knew all about, and in the corner of her room she kept a magnificently decorated Christmas tree, and on top a stunning thing, a very nice: star, a bright star, a special star.


Iman’s Sentence:
At the end of the stairs was the wizard’s lair, of where Layla dared not to go, and there he concealed his long-forgotten past hiding magical implements, and one very precious artifact, very precious, very sentimental: a wand, a silver-embellished wand, a delicate wand.

Examples of Reflective Thinking



Reflective Thinking is asking oneself…

Shallow people, people who only live on the surface, focus their lives on things.  They focus on the what?

Deep people, people who have wisdom and inner strength, focus on ideas, identity, and process. They focus on the why?

Who am I?

What is important to me?

Why do I believe what I believe?

What parts of myself do I like about myself?

What parts of myself do I not like about myself?

What are my strengths as a person?

What are my weaknesses as a person?

What moments in my life were the most important to me?

What moments in my life brought the most joy to me?

What moments in my life were the most painful to me?

Why were those moments important to me?

When was I most challenged?

How do I react to situations that I fail at?

How do I react to situations where I am successful?

What am I most afraid of?

What do I really, really care about?

What values are important to me and/or my family?

What values are not important to me?

How am I the same as my family?

How am I different from my family?

Who helped shape who I am?

What do I not want to be like when I’m older?

Where am I from?

What does it mean to be where I am from?

Where am I going?

Why do I want to go there?

Do I belong to anyone, anything, or any group?

When do I feel the most alone?

When do I feel the most happy?

What kind of person do I aspire to be?

What are my deepest secrets?

What are my most precious dreams?

Tuesday, December 6, 2016

Student Sentence Composing Examples #57


EXPERT SENTENCE
Like most first-time authors, I was filled with hope and despair upon the book’s publication: hope that the book might succeed beyond my youthful dreams; despair that I had failed to say anything worth saying.


JChapps’ Sentence
Like most W.o.W. newbies, she was overwhelmed with excitement and fear upon learning of Blizzard’s newest patch release:  excited that her Elf Wizard might succeed in fireballing the malevolent Lich King Acererak; afraid that her level wasn’t sufficient to overcome his minions and the deadly traps within  his tomb.


Zack’s Sentence
Like most elite gamers, he didn't have any excitement or enthusiasm about the attractive L.E.D headphones: excitement that would lead to him buying the cheap headset; enthusiasm that would lead him to feel gloomy about his own expensive headphones.


Kai’s Sentence
Like most first-time olympic athletes, I was filled with happiness and hope: happiness that I had made it to the olympics; hope that I will win a medal.


Elisabeth’s Sentence:
Similar to the other funeral-goers, I was engulfed by sorrow and joy: sorrow that the battle had taken far more young lives than we had ever anticipated; joy that we were finally free from the dark shadow of tyranny.


Eli’s sentence
Like most first years at Hogwarts, he was filled with the feeling of excitement and fear during the sorting ceremony: excitement of the discovery of magic; fear he’d be sorted into Slytherin.


Jonny’s Sentence:
Like all beginning season games, we were overwhelmed with fear and excitement before the match: fear that we might loose and disappoint our fans; excitement that it was our first game of the season.
     

Hunter’s sentence
Like all veteran players, I was accelerated with excitement and disappointment before the final game of the season: excitement of playing for a record; disappointment that I had not accomplished to take my team to the playoffs.


Sam’s Sentence:
Like most players, we were embarrassed and disappointed after our loss to our across town rival: embarrassed that we lost by a lot to an untalented team; disappointed that we will be missing out on the playoffs.


Elizabeth’s Sentence
Unlike most experienced travelers, I was feeling excitement and fright of getting on the plane: excitement that I’d get to explore a new place; fright of how high the plane was flying.


Natalie’s Sentence
Like most Sundays, the evening was filled with excitement and worry: excitement to be reunited with my friends after the weekend; worry to be drowned by homework and tests once again.


Erin’s Sentence:
Just as all the starting players, she was filled with nerves and excitement at the first game: nerves that her opponents would win against her brand new team; excitement that she got to play again from months off.


Matt’s Sentence:
Similar to most first-time skydivers, I was engulfed in excitement and fear upon the plane’s arrival: excitement that the plane might fly exceedingly beyond my wildest thoughts; fear that I had been unsuccessful to think about what should’ve been worth thinking about.


Angela’s Sentence
Like most first-time workers, she had confidence and fear upon her first day: confidence that she will impress her boss; fear that she will not be accepted when she arrived.


Sana’s Sentence:
Like most first-time substitute teachers, kids were disrespectful and awfully rude: disrespectful in that they were constantly talking out of turn;  rude because they would sass and adult without hesitation.

Monday, December 5, 2016

Student Sentence Composing Examples #56


Expert Sentence:
In my stillness, I began to notice the animals: strange birds with brilliant plumage, tree lizards with flickering blue tongues, and something that looked like a cross between a rat and a possum.


JChapps’s Sentence:
In the gloom, Jasmine started to make out the vague shapes in the fog:  a cohort of contorted bipeds with lanky, elongated arms, two smoke dragons swirling with circular motions in the air, and something that lumbered with a club like a cross between a great tree and a stooped over giant.


1st Hour

Bryce’s Sentence:
In my bed, I began to notice peculiar objects: strange beings who were faceless, green objects emitting a weird beeping sound, and something that seemed to be like a mix between a tentacle and a tube from a hospital.


Jackson’s sentence:
When he awoke, he began to see strange foods: deformed hot dogs with moldy buns, ripe bananas with tiny dark spots, and something that looked like a mix of an orange and a plum.


Sam’s Sentence:
While I was looking around, I began to notice the candy: colorful strings as long as my arm, chocolates with hot caramel dripping down, and a flavor of ice cream mix between chocolate, peanut butter, and fudge.


Will’s Sentence:
When I put the VR headset on, I started to see things: upside down flowers that somehow grew, rainbow fog covering the buildings, and a floating computer that sang...



4th Hour


Ashley’s Sentence:
In my boredom, I started to observe the scenery: small trees with colorful leaves, cold rain mixed with glistening snowflakes, and an animal that was either a cat or a dog.


Eric’s Sentence:
In my silence, I examined the painting: miniscule artistic details, interesting brush strokes, and an odd detail to background scenery.


Drake’s Sentence:
In my quickness, I began to notice the cars: strange Lamborghinis with crooked mustaches, jet cars with flashing gold fire, and something that looked like a mixture between a Bugatti and a Pagani.  


Ashley’s Sentence:
In the silence, I started to notice the scenery: tall trees with colorful leaves, waterfalls with purple water,  and something that looked like a sunset between a star and a cloud.



3rd Hour


Michael’s Sentence
In Lebron’s greatness, he began to exit his prime: dying stats with decreasing numbers, harder opponents with tougher challenges, and a super team that looked like the 72-10 Chicago Bulls and the 2016 Cavaliers combo.


Ryan’s Sentence
In her sight, Hannah started to see the yard: tulips with vibrant yellow, red roses with frosted white tips, and something that appeared like a mix of a tree and a pinecone.


Ava’s Sentence
In my hometown I began to notice the people: children playing with smiles on their faces, adults driving to work with positive moods, and something that is loud that sounds like a loud animal noise between a duck and a bird.


Riley’s sentence
In the fog, Riley began to notice strange things: weird unicorns with neon colors, golden dogs with red tails, and something that looked like a mix of Lebron James and Steph Curry.


5th Hour

Miles Sentence:
In his illness, he began to see the symptoms: serious fever with high temperature, a migraine with constant head pain, and something that seemed to be a red rash on his face and arm.


Katie’s Sentence:
In my family room, I started to notice all the furniture: strange chairs with pretty patterns, a long couch with a disgusting color all over, and something that looked like a cross between a bed and a sofa.


Annika’s Sentence
In my chair, I began to notice the different features at the lake: loud seagulls begging for food, boats speeding across the water, and a trail of baby swans that looked as if they had just learned to swim.


Iman’s Sentence
On her tongue, I gradually realized the darkened spots: immense lumps with orange dots, clear spit with inflamed pink cheeks, and something that seemed like a black sore or blackberry.



6th Hour


Lilli’s Sentence:
In my boredom, I looked around and noticed more in the classroom: the odd shaped stain in the carpet, the leftover tape on the walls from past posters, and all the old and new textbooks perfectly stacked in the bottom cupboards.


Fern’s Sentence:
In the silence, I was suddenly aware of the noises: joyful crickets chirped with glee, stealthy raccoons rummaged through the kitchen leftovers, and the stars seemed to sing like a cross between a songbird and a wolf’s howl.      


Marki’s Sentence:
In my picture, I began to see my ideas: a beautiful flower with red petals, the sky with huge white clouds, and something that looked like a mixture between a light blue and a bright yellow.


Claire’s Sentence:
In the silence, I began to see the beauty: a blooming pear tree with green delicacies, the roaming playful deers with their fawns, and something that seemed like a hybrid between a tulip and a rose.


Brainstorming Narrative Ideas



Friday, December 2, 2016

Sentence Compsosing Expert Sentences #051 - 055


#051
I gave her happy memories: a ride on a merry-go-round, a kitten to play with, a special toy.
          - Lois Lowry, The Giver


#052
In Maycomb, grown men stood outside in the front yard for only two reasons: death and politics.
          - Harper Lee, To Kill a Mockingbird


#053
By the dawn, the house smelled of Sunday: chicken frying, bacon sizzling, and smoke sausages baking.
          - Mildred D. Taylor, Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry


#054
Animals took shape: yellow giraffes, blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance.
          - Ray Bradbury, “There Will Come Soft Rains”


#055
Then the sounds of the forest returned: the first tentative croak of a tree frog, the buzz of one cicada, and then the full chorus.
          - Michael Crichton,  Jurassic Park

Thursday, December 1, 2016

Student Sentence Examples #54



Expert Sentence:
Animals took shape: yellow giraffes,  blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers cavorting in crystal substance.


JChapps’ Sentence:
The intra-dimensional life forms horrifically transmogrified before her eyes in a state of abject madness:  squirming tentacles, oozing pustules, and barbed spinal columns undulated in the primordial slime.


Alexander’s Sentence:
There are four houses for Hogwarts: red Gryffindor, yellow Hufflepuff, blue Ravenclaw, green Slytherin hoping to win the House Cup.


Marcus’ Sentence:
Tormented memories took form: ironclad warriors, dark mountain dwarfs, panting war horses, their king cloaked in the inky blackness of the hours before sunrise.


Jackson’s Sentence:
Cities took shape: tall buildings, long buses, many people, small businesses isolated from the outside world.


Collin’s Sentence:
The vision of the food took shape: green apples, yellow bananas, blue blueberries, and the juicy watermelon sitting in the bowl.


Jake’s Sentence
The team got ready: black suits, red ties, gold cufflinks, loud buses waiting in the parking lot.


Jonny’s Sentence:
The uniforms came in: white jerseys, black pants, dark socks, gold helmets that looked very swag.


Seth’s Sentence:
Lots of animals at the zoo: striped tigers, black gorillas, patterned giraffes, furry polar bears all frolicking in their habitats.


David’s Sentence:
The BMX bike took shape: black tires, a leather seat ,blue bike grips, a chrome bike frame  sat shining in the old garage.


Clara’s sentence:
Books on all kinds of different topics filled the shelves: science books, fantasy stories, graphic novels, and even history books from a time long before I could read.


Expert Sentence:
Animals took shape  -- yellow giraffes,  blue lions, pink antelopes, lilac panthers--  cavorting in crystal substance.


Alex’s Sentence:
The students sat down with their school supplies: #2 pencils, scrap paper, calculators, that were being used for the toughest math test of the year.


Madison’s Sentence:
Music instruments filled the room: guitars, violins, dust - covered untouched pianos stood ready for the young musicians.